vladrisdracolyas
Finally got to do some good and long writing...decided to move the fight scene till another chp ltr.

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Post by vladrisdracolyas on Mar 31, 2015 4:16:51 GMT

So, I'm stuck on a long fight scene in my novel. My problem is, how to get started on the long fight scene involving many characters at once and how much detail is to much? I got the scene in my head, heck even role played it out myself haha. However, when it comes to typing it out-I feel lost, and afraid it will be too detailed where the reader would get bored. I want to make sure they can really vision the scene and even get into it. How do you know when you went to far in detailing a scene? I know most don't want anything overboard-where personally, I love it like that. :/
Also, how do you, I guess the word would be chronologically write the scene that's so "busy"? I don't want it to not "flow" correctly if you know what I mean.

Thanks to anyone willing to help,
-Draco

"History is a lie agreed upon."

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Kit Roe Broke Editor #1 Posts: 26 Administrator	Post by Kit Roe on Mar 31, 2015 7:11:27 GMT I would love to help. Can you attach the word doc? I have ms word 2010. So, docx works.
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vladrisdracolyas Finally got to do some good and long writing...decided to move the fight scene till another chp ltr. Posts: 22 Shakespeare	Post by vladrisdracolyas on Apr 7, 2015 4:38:02 GMT Yes, I can-awesome sauce! I shall do that tomorrow night after "work". Thank you so much! Correction-you want it all or just my notes on how I wanted it...jw. lol I got like over 40pages done now and on chapter 5. (Which is where I'm stuck at lol)
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Post by vladrisdracolyas on Mar 31, 2015 4:16:51 GMT

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Post by Kit Roe on Mar 31, 2015 7:11:27 GMT

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Post by vladrisdracolyas on Apr 7, 2015 4:38:02 GMT